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An off-topic essay will receive a score of zero.
（Yet） a hero is one who ... （give definition for XXX）
Any unit or department should consider the overall situation and consider the overall situation.
第二段作者介绍了哥伦比亚航天飞机失事的过程及带给NASA的经验教训，这个例子确实也能证明作者的中心论点，但是作者没有处理好文章的笔墨，他把大量的文字都用来描写失事带给NASA经验教训以外的东西了。
该段落的重点笔墨不是放在飞机失事的过程，而是放在该失事给NASA带来了什么教训。
4分作文： Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【点评】 开始段落把中心观点讲出来了，并且也有thesis statement。
E为不完整句子，主语an extraction没有谓语动词。注意，V-ing不能单独作谓语，前面必须要有助动词be或have been等。
【例】Greg\'s having a docker on Saturday. [Arizona State University, Tempe, AZ]
这种思辨特质也是美国名校所青睐的，本文获得高分也就不足为奇了。（不怕犯错，不怕好笑，就怕没有独到的见解，这种特点，与我们中国学生比较循规蹈矩的习惯并不符合。所以大家在组织观点时，一定要注意规避中式英语及中式思维。）
【说明：】to stand up（起立）指从坐下的姿势转取直立或站着的姿势而言。
【例：】
(1) When the President entered, everyone in the room stood up.
总统进来时，室内每个人起立。
(2)When the “Star - Spangled Banner” is played, everyone must stand up and remove his hat.
教育的目的是什么
被林肯称赞为“发动我们伟大内战的小女人”的斯托夫人。
new life
Study English IV: Typing e a Short Paragraph in English
I knew night skies in which meteors left smoky trails across sugary spreads of stars. （descriptive word choice so as to evoke the wonder of the night sky）
4分作文： Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【点评】 开始段落把中心观点讲出来了，并且也有thesis statement。
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