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在开始段，作者提出自己的观点，如果只有talent而没有motivation，要想获得成功是不可能的（To truly succeed, you need to have at least as much motivation as talent, because if you don't posses the desire to do something, your talent may simply wither from neglect）。接着，作者提到将要讲到的两个例子，一个是美国歌手Jewel的故事，一个是他妹妹的故事。作者在提到自己的观点前，也讲了一些“废话”来丰富第一段的内容。

请注意，每次考试的打分表都稍有差别）。

两个阅卷者互相之间可能并不认识，也不知道要对同一篇作文打分，更不知道考生的个人资料。

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但是，如果两个阅卷者对一篇作文的给分相差两分

当然，这对考生的知识结构要求就很高了，考生没有足够的知识面，对例子本身缺少了解，是很难写到一定的长度的。

但是不可以矫枉过正，字体过大或间隔太大都会让人一眼看出你是为了增大篇幅而有意为之，这样反而弄巧成拙。

作者的开头使用了一系列反问句，值得我们学习。

第二段作者介绍了哥伦比亚航天飞机失事的过程及带给NASA的经验教训，这个例子确实也能证明作者的中心论点，但是作者没有处理好文章的笔墨，他把大量的文字都用来描写失事带给NASA经验教训以外的东西了。

叙述的文笔是如此流畅，几乎让人一口气就读到文章最后。

Although Gertrude and Hamlet are fictional characters, the way Shakespeare portrays them is representative of real human behavior. Many people let themselves be influenced by what happens to them, like Hamlet, and these people have difficulty finding happiness. On the other hand, some people, like Gertrude, react in a more positive way to any event that occurs and thus achieve a certain level of personal happiness regardless of what happens. This contrast proves that our reaction to events rather than the events themselves is the critical factor for achieving happiness.

One of the biggest recent scandals in the business world involved many executives from Enron. These men were focusedon how much they could produce, on how much money they could make for themselves. To increase their production, they engaged in risky, illegal, and unethical business practices that eventually led to the total destruction of the entire company and ruined the lives thousands of Enron employees and investors. Although the dollar value of these men may have been very high at one time, their current value and worth has plummeted. If we think of value in another sense, with a humanitarian or social slant, it becomes even more obvious that these men now have little worth in the eyes of their peers, former employees, and former stockholders. The Enron executives should have focused on making a quality product rather than on quantity in order to maintain a successful company along with satisfied employees and stockholders.

顾名思义，assignment就是任务，就是你这篇作文要围绕什么问题来展开。

阅卷委员会的给分为该篇作文的最后得分。

题目问的是能否从失败中学到有益的东西？作者在第一段讲了几句相关的话后过渡到正题，提出了自己的中心论点即value is not found only in success。

比如：我的论文写得怎样啊？（问话的肯定是想听表扬才问啊！）

用一个例子进行发挥，介绍了自 己三个阶段的快乐，层层递进。

第二个句子划线部分是插入语，表附加细节；

2. It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.

什么东西可以做主语呢？这里使用的是两个稍微复杂的主语，大家可以学习一下。

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