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正是在这个梦想支持下，她度过了生命中最艰难的时刻，最后被一个音乐制作人慧眼识珠，出版了她的唱片从而获得了成功。这个例子证明Jewel有talent（a critically acclaimed voice and songwriting skills），但更重要的是她有motivation，所以她才获得了成功。

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SAT作文的评分标准及阅卷方式

这与洪堡的名言“事物不重要，态度重要”有异曲同工之妙。

总之，开头你到底要说什么可以千变万化，但都要围绕几个关键词展开。

如同开始段落一样，结尾段落的写法也是有套路可循的。

第三段，作者举她的妹妹为例。妹妹自幼具有舞蹈天分，所以家里人把她送到舞蹈学校进行专业训练，但是妹妹缺少动力（My sister, however, didn't care about dancing, so she never practiced or put any effort into her class），所以最终家里人也放弃了梦想。作者在最后提到，妹妹虽然天分很好，但缺少动力，因而这样的天分没有被好好利用，所以没有在舞蹈上取得成功。

Another unsuccessful endeavour was the Vietnam War. America sent troops to Vietnam to prevent the country from becoming Communist. However, after many years of struggle, the troops were withdrawn and Vietnam fell to the Communist party. But this failure had much value. On one hand, our failure in Vietnam led to an important lesson in successful war strategy. The experience of the fierce guerrilla warled to changes in tactics that later helped America in other conflicts. Also, the Vietnam failure helped change the American culture. People protested the war and the government responded to the voice of the public. These important changes show the value that can come from failure.

当然，这对考生的知识结构要求就很高了，考生没有足够的知识面，对例子本身缺少了解，是很难写到一定的长度的。

从字数上来看，所有的满分作文都达到了一定的量，让阅卷者认为作者确实有话要说，思想深刻。

虽就越战本身说了一些不重要的细节，但没有把战争给美国带来什么样的教训说清楚。

你也可以说观点A的正面影响或观点B的负面影响，比如刚才的题目，在结束段落的最后一半，可以这么说：如果人们太在意失败，不能从失败中奋起或学到经验，那么，更大的失败往往就是不可避免的。

第二个特点，就是它的创造性，失去了创造性的知识，是死知识，而失去了创造性的人，不是死人，是死脑筋。

下面我们介绍一篇获得满分的叙述形式的文章： Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.No one is contented in this world, I believe. There is always something left to desire, and the last thing longed for always seems the most necessary to happiness. Marie Corelli, A Romance of Two Worlds Assignment: Do you think that people are capable of finding happiness or are they always searching for something beyond what they have? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and example taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation. 优秀范文： Happiness means different things to different people. My sister is happiest when she performs onstage in a play. My best friend is happiest when he is pitching a perfect game on the baseball field. People find happiness in all sorts of ways, but that doesn't mean they stop searching for something more. Finding happiness and continuing to pursue other goals are not mutually exclusive propositions. Instead, both of these activities can work together to motivate you, as I've learned from my own experience. When I was in middle school, my favourite class was art and I was disappointed that the class period was so short and only twice a week. Although I was happy during those times, I really missed art during the rest of the week. However, knowing that art class was approaching helped motivate me to pay attention in the rest of my classes because I knew that my "reward" would soon follow. Once we were in the art room and I was immersed in painting or sculpting or drawing, I found incredible happiness in the creative process and carried this feeling with me throughout the remainder of the day, yet I wasn't fully satisfied with this small amount of exposure and I wanted more. I did appreciate the happiness I had, but at the same time I was looking something beyond that. So I begged my parents to let me take art classes after school and on the weekend, I managed to convince them I'd be happier if I could have this additional creative time. Taking more and different art classes outside of school exposed me to a variety of different techniques and media that I never had time to explore in school, like metal-working, wood-carving and print-making. I grew even more enthusiastic about the visual arts and found even more happiness than I could have imagined thanks to these additional classes. By wanting something more, I was able to find additional contentment and inspiration and I truly was happy with the results. Yet I didn't stop reaching for other goals. I really wanted to have my artwork displayed for the public, so I worked very hard for several years to develop a portfolioand I achieved my goal last year with my first solo show at a local gallery. This success gave me much happiness, and I'm already planning additional shows. Being content with my art makes me happy on a regular basis, but this doesn't keep me from wanting something more at the same time. For me, striving for additional goals adds to my happiness, so I don't see the two actions as contradictory at all. Instead, searching for something beyond what you have can help you to appreciate and enhance whatever it is that makes you truly happy. 【点评】 这个作文题问的是，人们能否寻找到快乐，或人们是否总不满足于眼前的快乐？ 在第一段，作者首先说明对不同的人来说，快乐意味着不同的内容，人们可以找到快乐，但不会就此停止。

Let's consider Julius Caesar, a hero in his own time but regarded, thanks mainly to Shakespeare's play, as a man with mortal failings: vain, superstitious and arrogant. He can no longer be thought of as a hero, but just a man who came to prominence for his actions at a certain point in history. He has his place in the history of the Western world and his face on ancient coins, but scarcely fits our need for a hero for all times whom we can revere.

这句话可以说是在对全文做总结，同时又提出了问题的一个反面，和全文呼应。

许多同学对怎么样写结尾段落也感到茫然。

可以说，段落的重点很得当。

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