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Every age, and every culture has its heroes. In some times and places the heroes have been gods or god-like creatures from mythology, or mortals apparently much above the mass of humanity. But today,sports stars, film stars, and political leaders with clay feet have replaced Ram, Achilles, Cleopatra, and Alexander. In fact there are almost no heroes of any age that can withstand our tendency to debunk. There are figures who will always be in the history books, but they won't always be regarded as heroes.

还有就是最后一句（Hopefully, they will change it）显得很勉强，让人感觉作者是无话可说但又想拉长文章篇幅的一个无奈之举，另外使文章的语气有点玩世不恭。

4分作文： Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【点评】 开始段落把中心观点讲出来了，并且也有thesis statement。

就是说，作文的最后得分会影响写作部分的最后得分。

虽就越战本身说了一些不重要的细节，但没有把战争给美国带来什么样的教训说清楚。

在决定写叙述形式的作文时，考生要切记，你这个故事一定要有足够的长度，故事的本身要有一定的吸引力，能够很好地说明论点。

在这25分钟内，考生要审题、确定思路、组织语言来完成一篇独立的命题作文，可以说，稍微浪费点时间就根本不能有效完成一篇作文。

exhibits adequate but inconsistent facility in the use of language, using generally appropriate vocabularydemonstrates some variety in sentence structure

从正面来看，作者还是了解了这篇作文的目的，对作文题的要求还是把握住了，有自己的观点，并且知道用例子来支持自己的观点。

Success is achievement of something desired, planned, or attempted. However, just because an endeavour was unsuccessful does not mean it is without value. The failed Columbia mission and the Vietnam War are two such examples.

任何一篇作文都离不开开头，英文叫Introduction Paragraph。

综上所言，在第一段，你应该表明自己的观点（中心论点），同时要提及将要在正文里列举的例子，在表明中心观点前，讲几句“废话”来慢慢过渡到你的中心论点上。

每篇练习文章都按照4个段落展开，开始段、结尾段加上中间的两个段落（每个例子写一个段落），把SAT的四段论文章反复练习，以保证真正考试时候得心应手。

但是，成功的人毕竟是少数。

总之，这个例子本身确实能打动人，要不落俗套。

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