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能在25分钟内写那么多东西至少从一个侧面证明了自己的写作能力。
所以说，基本的东西都有了，但和6分作文开头比较，这篇作文的开头稍显单薄。
范文六
结尾段，牵涉到一个非常重要的论证方法：证实与证反。
Some ... （the type that the author does not approve ）
Another unsuccessful endeavour was the Vietnam War. America sent troops to Vietnam to prevent the country from becoming Communist. However, after many years of struggle, the troops were withdrawn and Vietnam fell to the Communist party. But this failure had much value. On one hand, our failure in Vietnam led to an important lesson in successful war strategy. The experience of the fierce guerrilla warled to changes in tactics that later helped America in other conflicts. Also, the Vietnam failure helped change the American culture. People protested the war and the government responded to the voice of the public. These important changes show the value that can come from failure.
文章的拼写错误很多，全部都是口语化的东西，虽然SAT没有要求考生把作文写得像academic essay（学术论文）一样，但要是一个阅卷者在批阅一份作文时候，感觉像是在听这个作者面对面地讲话，他能给这个作文很高的评价吗？而且，整个文章的句式死板单调，显得很稚气，不像是个即将进入大学学习的中学生的作品。
当然，如果49道语法试题满分，即使作文0分的话，也可以拿到整个写作部分800中的680分左右。
因为考生的作文要被扫描到电脑里交给阅卷者评判，而方框外的内容是不会被扫描到电脑里的。
能在25分钟内写那么多东西至少从一个侧面证明了自己的写作能力。
【写作语言分析】
值得注意的是，对于SAT的作文题，你是什么样的观点不会影响你的最后得分，关键是你的观点是否被有效证明。
下面是该作文题的几篇考生作文，并逐一附上评析。
文章的最后一句话“And I plan to continue this my whole life, facing new situations with an educated, open mind”也分别用“educated”和“open mind”暗暗呼应了第一段所提到的这两个事物上。
Rudyard Kipling once wrote in his poem, which said that you will be a man if you can stand up and say what you believe in when all men around you doubt you. Heroes must have the courage to risk everything they love to stand up for theirselves in the face of opposition. Both William Iloyd Garrison and Harriet Beecher Stowe stood up against a society which had accepted slavery as a right. They believed that what their heart told them was right and risked everything to tell the public what they believed in. These two people have hopefully shown others to believe in themselves and what they view in their hearts.
It was that year that my mind opened and I began to truly become educated. Rather than trying to fill my head with disconnected facts and other people's ideas, I now collect knowledge that I can use to form or change my opinions. And I plan to continue this my whole life, facing new situations with an educated, open mind.
虽然她所有书的销量还赶不上克林顿一本书，但你能就此认为她的价值就不如克林顿吗？作者的态度不言自明。
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